Here’s a question for you: why do people always want what they can’t have? Why does the little kid in the candy store long for the king size candy bar even though he knows his parents won’t buy it for him? Why does the hopeless bachelor dream of finding true love even when he knows that even his mother doesn’t like his face? Is it because of their brain hard-wired human nature? Is it because of something different; like their personalities and personal psyche? Or is it simply because they are too stupid to learn from their past mistakes? It’s a pretty tough question so don’t be upset if you can’t nail it right away.
i like this, but it seems to be asking too many questions. maybe if you ease up a little, and see where that gets us.
ReplyDeletethis is very good so far! keep going! i want to see what your opinion of these questions are! just make sure to go back to them. i think it would be a good idea to go back to them for the conclusion. explain why the kid wants the candy bar or just finish their stories, even if he doesn't get it.
(like for example, "and thats why he doesn't get the candy bar." or "that's why he got it."
or something like that..... (i hope that was useful?)
good idea, I think that is how I am going to end my paper.
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