Snippet

Here's a snippet from the memo:

I’m sitting in a chair next to a water cooler. All I can think about is what Doc will say. There is only two ways this visit can turn out. Either I’m cleared to play and I can get back to playing for the central team, or I am rejected and I have to wait even longer before I get another shot at coming back. To anyone other than me right now, this would probably seem like a very trivial matter, but, to me, the anxiety makes it so much worse. At the moment, I feel like this is life and death.

Should I keep it in first person?